Yes, I have remained faithful to my blogger-promise and now offer Part Deux of man-made music. I'm trying to stretch myself a bit in this hobby of mine, so please bear with me in my experimentation, and please feel free to offer your thoughts or critique. I really enjoy writing music but don't have much at stake in it (album sales aren't really an issue), so I won't be offended by disapproval, dislike, or honest criticism. I also won't be angry if you'd rather just listen to the homemade song and not comment at all (though it will certainly make me feel less special).
Here are the lyrics.
Poros and Penia
I still have the night
When you stood in the door and lingered
And both of us seemed right
When you opened up your eyes
I still have your stare
When I looked in your heart
And we both knew from the start
That both of us were wrong about something
And one of us knew but wouldn't say
That he stood on the stairs
As I reached for your hands
He watched and he waited
And love is all you wanted
To forget when pleasure showed his face
And you turned and walked your other way
And distance offered empty space
I still have the night
When you stood on the stairs and lingered
And both of us were right
About standing still in want about something
And, oh, the words in your mouth
Were lying in the folds of your dress
And waiting for the winds of the evening
To blow them away
or breathe into me
And only one of us knew
That he waited in your room
To guide you to your tomb
And show you how to cover up something
And show you love was only for something
And love is all you wanted
To forget when pleasure showed his face
And he laughed and let down your hair
Took off your clothes and dressed you in disgrace
And love is all you wanted
To forget when pleasure showed his face
And you laughed when he let down your hair
And distance offered empty space
Note: I decided on Poros and Penia because they were, as Socrates is told in Plato's Symposium, the parents of Love. The former is representative of abundance, the latter of need or poverty. The song isn't about the story from Plato, but the idea of Love having such parentage is what I'm trying to get at.